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This poem is wow, just wow in every sense of the word. It's sad and remorseful and beautiful, and dark - this is everything a long poem should be. It's ...

It sounded more like a rap or a freestyle than a poem, but you have it in the poetry section, I'm going to critique it as a poem. The Good ...

Hey Chic, This was a good lil' poem lot of power in just a little bit, and i thin you picked a topic that most people can relate to. - ...

Your poem is different, i will never say that art is wrong, but this is really different - i would like to know the backstory to this one, it lacks ...

I Like your poem - im kind of a romantic so this one stuck out. I really like how you focus on just you two people, even though your in ...

What an interesting poem - its good. few things i noticed 1. You had a really good iambic trimeter going until you got to "Swallowing kin and stars" im not ...

This is a beautiful poem. i really like the imagery, its twilight, dark gloomy-ish, one of my favorite things - and def. the most unique element in this poem (in ...

I like these you use a lot of liquid sounds and i love that in Haiku, makes them flit right off the tongue. my favorite is the 2nd one, i ...

I gotta agree with the last person, The subject is overdone, i think its a bittersweet way to write. On one had there is a lot to be sad about ...