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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Working on Title!!!

    I liked it, its an interesting concept and i must admit one i haven't read too many of. I liked the characters, although its short and there wasnt really that ...

    Aug 17, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Exam Blues

    Being less than 5 days away from an exam myself i can completely relate to this poem and really liked it too. I do agree with the other post that ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Teenager

    I thought it was really good I liked how it was someone reflecting on their past instead of the usual teenage moaning lol It really reminds me of my mum ...

    Apr 18, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Truly, Madly, Deeply

    I did like the story but i thought it was very long to read I would shorten it down a little maybe put it in chapters with cliffhangers at each ...

    Apr 17, 2008


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