davantageous

What is a muse? To be absorbed in thought or to say to oneself in a thoughtful manner. O.k. I can review now. Muse #1 My Muse is a chameleon: ...

Sadness is the pain. great line... the pain of what ...... Everything else is numb Like no blood rushing to the skin. Blue water in her eyes, understatement Tears... Could ...

I love the fact that you took time to write a poem about today. So festive. Excellent way to be smashing. Just a simple poem and factual. Great use of ...

General opinion was a great poem with some minor issues. First: Love the title and the opening line. Goodbye to Goodbyes I don't want them anymore. Second: Slight difficulty in ...

"Jakey, time for school. I smile as he pries his tired eyes open. "Sam, I don't wanna go!" He pouts, turning into his pillow. "Neither do I, Jakey . But ...

Chapter 2: Maisie Smith It was sunny in Florida. This meant two things for Maisie Smith. One, she really needed some after sun on her nose and face, Two, She ...

no voyage— the lanterns all hung off until they are a pink-toured pails of glass and tin snow filtered fish budding up against the hull this south salt sloop that ...

I miss you I miss you I miss you I miss you When we started off It was just me watching from the corner You didn't take one chance of ...

I miss you so much that I think I am losing whatever sanity I had left. Of course it changes day to day- sometimes I am given the strength to ...

I love the format of the poem, but even more the wording paints a clear picture of a life. One similar to mine. Love the fact that you also were ...

as twilight begins to fade, the lights mark their favourite spots in the sky. one by one, they take a seat, and watch the show Earth puts on below. the ...

When you see the sign, you'd want to cross the road. No one soon knows why urban decay takes hold There is never silence; the cars and the machines, the ...

In a land before the creation of stars and planets, there once lived a powerful being. His name was Erthas. Erthas, in the eyes of all the smaller beings that ...

Folded in my arms you are a butterfly in reverse, Giving up your wings, will deliver my curse. Your letting to of me. i think you meant "GO" Your letting ...

I like it, i love it, i want some more of it! I just wanted a kiss nothing but your kiss, now I can't believe how it came to this; ...