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darkmindedemo

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Ice Vs Fire

    Just did. I did not notice I could do that.

    Mar 15, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Forest

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    I like this. It's short and simple. But it didn't make me feel anything, and isn't that the point of poetry? I do like how you have the first line ...

    Mar 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Special Someone

    No problem.

    Mar 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nightmare (Some Editing)

    Thank you. I will rewrite once I have computer access.

    Mar 10, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nightmare (Some Editing)

    Thank you. I will probably edit this soon... It is quite irritating to do it on my phone.

    Mar 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Penned

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    I really like this poem. It shows how even if you write out pages of your emotions, if they don't hold value, then they are empty. It also shows that ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Goodbye (Edited 2)

    Yes you did. The whole writing process is write, share, edit, share, and more editing. Everything can be edited to be made better. Thank you for showing me these things ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Yesteryear *Edited*

    Thank you for this. I will work on improving it, that is why I put it on here. This is a rough draft and I wanted to find a way ...

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: You Can Come to Me (Deicated to Em101Cats)

    No problem, its really good.

    Mar 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Goodbye (Edited 2)

    Thank you. I will work on adding more information and context for the story, once I find out what it is. This was a quick write and I put it ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Goodbye (Edited 2)

    Thank you. I will work on making this better and then you will be able to see the better edited version of this. This is a quick write that I ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Goodbye (Edited 2)

    Thank you for this, soon you will be able to see an edited version of this. This was a quick write and I wanted to put it up here to ...

    Mar 5, 2016


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