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Re: Memory of a Feeling--Kingdom Hearts
OMG!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! You could've made longer paragraphs, dear!! Instead of lots of short ones. Not that it has to be frightfully long, but just longer. My fave ...
May 25, 2007 -
Re: A Slight Fluidity - Kingdom Hearts
This totally rocks!! WHEE!! I LOVE KH!!! KH2 to be precise... Never played the first one.. LOL... Oh yeah, you might wanna separate dialogues and contents for example, from your ...
May 25, 2007 -
Re: The Black Cobra: Chapter 1
I think that you should work on your beginning as said by the people above.... And yes, I love this story!! My from is studying Phantom of the opera this ...
May 24, 2007 -
Re: Chasing Rainbows Chapter 1
The room reverberated with noise, lights shone from glittering lamps. Everyone fell silent as a man made his way into the ring. The room reverberated with noise, lights shone from ...
May 19, 2007