dante93

Thank you all. Sadly this did come from personal experience. Sad. True. All the above. Twisted life, though, provides for good poetry and writing. Also after I originally wrote this ...

Thanks. I just want to thank everyone for reviewing this, even though I wrote it a few years back. I just wanted to see what people thought of the 13 ...

Thanks people of Earth. This was a story I wrote about a four years ago. Found it a couple weeks ago and just kinda threw it on here. Thanks again ...

I understand the grammar if you speak of commas and such, but if it was in dialog it was intentional.

Thanks for the comment. Sorry if there wasn't more clarity, but this was something that was just pounding in my head and I had to get it out. I imagined ...

Thanks. Yes it is sad that most art comes from pain, but without what we do there would be no hope. Our pain is the hope for the future. Our ...

Thanks for the review. I put orange in the wrong place. I just looked back at it and changed to wording so it flows again.

I am writing this on my own poem for no reason.

I will tell him that. I think this was his fourth poem, but he wanted me to post it. I'm sure he'll appreciate the comments.

Thanks. I know all to well what pain is, but I wrote this as I had a flashback of my past. It's not that I am sad. I have done ...

This seems like a broken poem, which fuels its meaning. I like it. I understood it.

Thanks.

delmarria you have not made an enemy of me. I quite enjoy good criticism (criticism that's well placed and has a good point). But the whole idea of our world ...

Thanks for the comment. I find the ending is appropriate though. And yes I guess it is like a holding candy in front of a starving baby. I really appreciate ...

Thanks.