dannyr122

Thanks for the reviews. I have edited it slightly but decided not to follow it up much as i am busy with a much bigger project called Terror of which ...

I like the poem. Very emotional. I just want to point out one or two little errors to make it perfect. Like a lone ship out to see see should ...

I agree with kirstybree that the first stansa makes the poem a hell of a lot more complicated than a poem of this style should be. I also think some ...