danipower0204

I there, thanks for your review. The idea was just how I felt that day. I decided to make my feelings a poem. As to the meaning, the word xenophobic ...

Thanks guys! Really appreciate all the nice comments from you! And I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks! Appreciate your comment! :)

Thanks Hayden. Appreciate it! More would be coming soon!

Thanks for the reviews! Shizzley - I agree with you on that, and I changed it. Thanks for that, I would seriously not have realised it otherwise. Demoness - thanks ...

Hi everyone! Thanks for all the responses. BenFranks, I put a full stop at the end, you're right. I've capitalized every line because they all spell the poem title downwards ...

Thanks for the reply! I think you're right, so I added the AND. Glad you liked it!

Yeah, you do make sense. I think I will rewrite all of Beckings' part. It is old (wrote it a few years ago), and the Daemon one is new. I ...

I kind of see what you mean. Erm. I think what I did was trying to get into the POV, in this case Beckings' point of view of the second ...

Wow! Awesome review! Thanks a lot for that. I knew this was gonna get a heavy beating, as it's quite "newly" written, in the sense that I haven't gone over ...

Well, you pretty much said it, Maxlovesfang15, merge them, and delete chapter 2. See how it turns out and maybe it'll even be something better than you'd expect it to. ...

Thanks! I agree it is common. When I was writing it I thought I should change a few things as it might sound like every other story. You did in ...

Thank you for your reply! First off, thanks for all the spell-checks and word-checks. It is always good to hear an outside review for a story you've written. I'm not ...

Thanks for the reply!!!