danipower0204

Thanks so much guys. It really means a lot to me. You're making me want to write again!

Thank you so much for your wonderful replies. I don't frequent this place much as of late, but you guys are turning the tide!

Thanks for the feedback guys!

Thanks for your comments, guys!

Thanks for the comments and reviews! Will take everything into consideration! As for extending the poem, no can do, as it is an acrostic (first letter of every line downwards ...

Thanks for your comment!

Thanks for the reviews! Could you please give an example of what you mean with "the flow is off" or "It tends to get off the flow at many places"? ...

Thanks for your comment, Lavender! Glad the feeling of it all came across.

Thanks for your comments and reviews! Really really appreciate them.

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

Thanks for the review. Foris Solum means, as the title says, "Outside Alone". ;)

Thanks KatTrain! I'll try to find another word for the V, however I do kind of like it. Let's see what I can come up with. glad you liked it!

Hey there, thanks for the review! Really appreciate it and glad you liked it.

Thanks a lot for your awesome review, Whisperer! I tried my best to follow your suggestions, I do agree with what you've said. About the third to second person, hmm, ...

Thanks for your review. I have changed the poem with your suggestions. Glad you found the poem touching. Thanks!