danipower0204

Hey there! I can see the sort of idea in this poem. It's very general, which can be a good thing. I would suggest to add a proper rhythm to ...

Wow! Really liked this. I really liked the rhythm in this poem, and of course the rhyme was pretty much spot on. It reminds me a little of one of ...

Hi there! I kind of like this poem. I guess it's something personal? Let me go on to some features. One thing that bothered me slightly is the fact that ...

I liked it!!! Of course, as others have pointed out, there were a few mistakes in grammar, but nonetheless, great little funny story! I found it original. Of course it's ...

This was a freewrite in comm. arts, and I tought you guys might like it :) As Santa looked over the nice and naughty list of boys and girls, he ...

OK, I like your idea a lot! I can already sort of see what will happen next, because in the prologue we are told of the event. So I definitely ...

I found your prologue to be very enticing indeed. And that's saying something. It takes quite a bit for me to keep reading something (easily distracted?), but it was nice ...

I disagree. It may be a long chapter. But a long chapter for what? A short story? Then yes. A book? Then no. Book chapters are anywhere from 2-50 pages ...