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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1

    Oh, thank you so much!! NEVER did I expect to get a review like that.

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Blocked

    I dunno. I was never told, but I always did that on facebook, so I guess it's automatic for me. (I just hold shift and press enter twice, but it ...

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hi! Thank you so much for the review! I should really fix that first sentence, shouldn't I? ;-) Thanks again for the review! Good luck in your writing endeavors!

    Apr 2, 2014
  • Other » Culture, Dramatic Re: Sip It Up

    It could be that the majority of the people on this website are under 18, so you're targeted audience is pretty small.

    Apr 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1

    Fixed it!!

    Apr 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1

    Hey, thanks so much! I guess I was pretty focused in the beginning, but not so much in the end. I'll work on that. Thank you for your input! It ...

    Apr 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The House of Sand-- Chapter 1 Part 1

    Thank you so much! Rereading it last night, I realized that I never said what had hit Faylinn. I like the deranged chipmunk idea... ;-) Thank you for the review! ...

    Apr 1, 2014


You'd better wise up, Pony... you get tough like me and you don't get hurt. You look out for yourself and nothing can touch you, man.
— Dallas Winston, The Outsiders