dancingwatermelon

I did notice that I haven't really described anyone and no one had said anything about it!! I've often been told that I have a problem with commas; I just ...

Thank you for the review! (That was a LOT better than my first review! XD)

Thank you for this review!! Made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. ;-)

P.s. Good to have you here! ^_^

Thank you for the review!! It always takes me at least three chapters to have huge plot jumps. I just like to ease my readers into the story. *shrugs* But... ...

Thank you for the review!! I've always heard it as "sitting IN a tree" and "sitting ON a branch". It just sounds weird to me to say that she was ...

Thank you for the review! She can't understand how this man, her 'Papa' can love her when her own father-- you know, someone who's kind of supposed to love her?-- ...

Thank you for the review! Basically, the girl's father is abusive, and this man, her 'Papa', is totally opposite. She can't understand how he can love her while her father ...

Thank you!

Thank you so much! ^_^ I wasn't sure if I should include the scene with the punishment or not, so I just skipped it. I'm glad you thought it was ...

Thank you so much! It means a lot. ^_^ I'll let you know when I do!

Thank you so much! I was beginning to despair at the lack of reviews. XD Major plot twist(s) next chapter, also introducing more of her family!

Thank you so much! I love them as well; so does Faylinn. ;-)

They were having a bonfire outside, and they hadn't gotten along well. If that was unclear, perhaps I should revise it! And she's not the only one; just the only ...

I extended this to become a chapter, so I posted the rest here: If you liked this, head on over and see what happens next! =)