dancingmangos

I love this! There's not much I would change, or can think of changing right now to make it better. You have a very unique writing style, and I hope ...

What's your book about? That would help the name-choosing process.... But I like The Tactican or the Battles of Time.

Our fears are finally starting to settle down. Rahi and I have begun to have one word conversations about stuff like the weather, or the dishes, or our sleeping arrangements. ...

This is perfection!! The right length, depth, thought sequence. I especially liked how the girl doesn't talk, since it reinforces the idea that she's done for, has no more life ...

I think that anyone can relate to this poem, because I don't think there is anyone in the world that hasn't been affected by cancer in some way, no matter ...

This is really great! It demonstrates the huge turmoil of feelings, and I really like that. Besides all my normal nitpicks of capitilization and such, I can see nothing wrong ...

I really liked this! It's great. It almost hurt me personally to think that he was still in love with Leslie, when he went on with his life with Amy ...

This is something I wrote in class that just flowed. They were the first words that came to mind, and they worked, so I put them in. Thank you for ...

Thank you for the reviews, by the way! I would like to point out that this is really just a prologue, or a basic structure, for a story that is ...