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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Christians' Lie

    Hi there. This poem was really put together well. I am a full believer in Christ and i know that he loves every one no matter what they believe. The ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: That Voice

    I'm going to agree with KJ. you definitely have got something here and it easily ropes people in the same affect many great writers have :D. One problem (unless this ...

    Nov 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Masterpeice

    Whats the poem portraying. I do agree though that it is a masterpiece. I think that the poem needs a bit more feeling to it, I can see it comes ...

    Jul 19, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I hate you with all my hearts

    its a good song but usually put the chorus after like 2/3 verses because then it sounds better and the chorus must usually have the name of the song in ...

    Jul 4, 2008
  • Script » General, General Re: Amore(Love).

    i'm new at this so lets see how i do :) the story was good but you didn't explain the characters that well or give ages. the reason that victor ...

    Jul 4, 2008


What holds you betwixt panic and serenity? That is, if it's not among the many querulous quagmires unfit for elaboration.
— soundofmind as Emiliano Achillinus