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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The Christians' Lie

    Hi there. This poem was really put together well. I am a full believer in Christ and i know that he loves every one no matter what they believe. The ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: That Voice

    I'm going to agree with KJ. you definitely have got something here and it easily ropes people in the same affect many great writers have :D. One problem (unless this ...

    Nov 14, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Masterpeice

    Whats the poem portraying. I do agree though that it is a masterpiece. I think that the poem needs a bit more feeling to it, I can see it comes ...

    Jul 19, 2008
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I hate you with all my hearts

    its a good song but usually put the chorus after like 2/3 verses because then it sounds better and the chorus must usually have the name of the song in ...

    Jul 4, 2008
  • Script » General, General Re: Amore(Love).

    i'm new at this so lets see how i do :) the story was good but you didn't explain the characters that well or give ages. the reason that victor ...

    Jul 4, 2008


I love her dearly, but I can’t live with her for a day without feeling my whole life is wasting away.
— Miss Kenton, The Remains of the Day by Kazuo Ishiguro