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Re: The Christians' Lie
Hi there. This poem was really put together well. I am a full believer in Christ and i know that he loves every one no matter what they believe. The ...
Jun 21, 2010 -
Re: That Voice
I'm going to agree with KJ. you definitely have got something here and it easily ropes people in the same affect many great writers have :D. One problem (unless this ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Masterpeice
Whats the poem portraying. I do agree though that it is a masterpiece. I think that the poem needs a bit more feeling to it, I can see it comes ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: I hate you with all my hearts
its a good song but usually put the chorus after like 2/3 verses because then it sounds better and the chorus must usually have the name of the song in ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Amore(Love).
i'm new at this so lets see how i do :) the story was good but you didn't explain the characters that well or give ages. the reason that victor ...
Jul 4, 2008
