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cyan

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Nature Re: A Tree Falls in the Forest

    Ah, wow. This poem is really really beautiful. I love the extended metaphor of the tree representing a person who won't let themselves take up space. I think the tree ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Sestina for Societal Collapse

    I am in love with the sestina form that you chose here! the cycling words seem to make the transformation within this poem - from viewing the inevitable end of ...

    Oct 11
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: four. mayibeexcused

    I read through your whole collection "a body that will not behave", enraptured. each one is so visceral and creative. I love the use of parentheses and footnotes. I honestly ...

    Oct 10
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Life of a Teenage Girl

    First review on this site! I loved this sentence. . My chin is too long my nose is big my cheekbones are too small. It's really interesting how you use ...

    Oct 7


I'll admit the two turtle doves are growing on me, but there are ten birds in this house already and we both know geese are feathered bioweapons of mass destruction.
— Silvern