cvandoren1

I couldn't find a single thing to change in this part. Your grammar is all good. I, once again, love how you capture this inside of a young girl's mind. ...

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And about the Isaac thing, I added in another part about him in the beginning when I was editing my story and completely forgot about adding it in here. So ...

Thank you for the review! And just to let you know, I'm posting pages, not chapters. My chapters can get really long and I don't know whether or not people ...

Just to let you know there is a page 2. I just thought I had published it, but I really hadn't. Here is the link And as for where to ...

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Thanks for the review! I have recently posted The Secret Service page #3!

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Thank you! Btw I have also posted The Secret Service page #2 and #3!

Thank you! I have already posted The Secret Service page #1 and The Secret Service page #3!

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Well, keep up the good work:)