curiousvampire

It looks like the wolves are taking over! Hey W-Lupus nice meeting ya, I'm curious by the way. This is ver interesting and I like to read more, so if ...

Welcome to the site, isn't it awesome? Hope your finding your way around the place, okay. Anyways the piece wasn't horrid or particularly spectacular, but it was okay and I ...

This is how it is from middle school through high school, sadly you have the populars, nerds, emos and everything else- been there done that. This was okay, except for ...

I liked this, it was original and interesting. It looks like it might be love triangle between Mikey, Tyler and Cara being in the middle. Or at least that how ...

First off let me welcome you the site, I'm curious and shall be your reviewer. Second this was I won't lie but truly visionary, original and brilliant on all levels. ...

Hey Aspiring! Chris Redfield and the infamous Jill Valentine are my favorite characters in the Resident Evil Series- I have most of the games and all the movies - so ...

Hey random! I won't lie to you I read the first chapter and it was pretty good and this was great also. Your writing style were very vivid, but not ...

I'm finish, finally! okay these two chapters were great. I'm really happy that Kara told Ayden the truth and everything, plus it Kara finally gave into her feelings for Issac ...

Mistakes and comments are in red and/or in bold. Could n't this day get any worse ? I don't didn't feel like myself anymore until not since that day I ...

So sweet and yet so sad. This was great actually, but your tenses are jumping all over the place so that makes me not fully love it and like roe ...

It's been long since I last posted my chapter. Hope you enjoy it. Reviews welcome. I have started with the second part of the chapter but I don't have time ...

Hello eab 10, nice to meet ya and welcome to the mystical world of YWS, hope you like it here so far. On to the review, okay this was good ...

Hey babymagic18. thanks for the review so here's one in return. Okay you had few mistakes that forest already pointed that I advise you to follow. Now the only problem ...

Okay first off this was seriously way to short second it was one huge chunk of unreadable mess- use paragraphs you have space- third it gave me no affect of ...

Wow, I would have never guess that you was a new. This was really good for only novice. Your first paragraph is what really reeled me in. Your sentences were ...