curiousvampire

Hello Austenite, my name is curiousvampire and I'm here to review. This was good I suppose and you had so few mistakes, but you had me wondering how did they ...

:lol: Hello Chal and a big WELCOME to the site and I would like to say that I loved this; it made me giggle and think back on my cats. ...

This was stupendous, I so loved this LPR3. This was very sad indeed. There is nothing left for me to nitpick on that the others already haven't so all in ...

Hey Scherzede thanks for the review and your awesome poem. By the way where I'm from I have friends from different backgrounds of Cacausian, Asain, Latin, African American and Indian ...

You have a ton of mistakes that the others already pointed out and your grammar is in need of some definite work. Like GK said to I don't think you ...

Sorry I'm late, but I'm her now. Okay Skins as always made some great nitpicks but missed a few stuff. Chapter-6 Olivia 8:13 AM I thought that it was going ...

Hey Sela, your story was great and kind of scary.... now I know never to trust christian boys:). Just kidding, but I really did like this. It was really different ...

Yay, yet another one!! Hey BW my horror master :smt003 . As classy said it was cool 8) . But again you should have had more detailing in your character ...

Hello again BW- hope you don't mind me abbreviating your name- again this was good and spine tingling, but it needs more substance especially your narrator who is such a ...

Hello and Welcome to YWS fellow writer :), this was good and your descriptions were colorful and fluid throughout your piece and the sentences were great too. I love horror, ...

Hello Obsess, nice to meet and welcome to the site hope your finding your way around the YWS alright and if you need any help or a review on something ...

Hey KxK, I'm here to review of course. I already raed the first part and thought it was good now so on with the nitpicks: This is a follow-up to ...

Hey KAH welcome to YWS if you got any questions about finding your way around ask me or anyone else familiar with the site for help. Now on to your ...

For some reason I'm always here second... anyways I'm here to review 8). Here goes the chapter five. I am glad I reached here. Reviews welcome. Chapter-5 OLIVIA 3:55 AM ...

Hey Lala here to review as requested. This made me cry *sobs*. This was really sad and I loved how it captured her emotions in this piece it was very ...