cubanbigfoot321

Even though Ranger Hawk pretty much gave you all you needed to improve this story to you, I just stopped by to tell you that I enjoyed this story quite ...

I usually don't like romance, but what you have here is really good and I enjoyed it. Your vocabulary and grammar is excellent and I would rather enjoy more things ...

Even though storyweaver13 pretty much summed up everything you could fix with it, you could add just add a little bit more detail of what is going on, even though ...