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Ah. it just seems so peaceful. i love waking through the woods, off trails and onto secret little dear paths. There is really nothing at all to critic on the ...

Dude... did you just critique my review of your story? The choppy style is becaue the character des not know anything about his surrounding who he is or anything else. ...

Thanks for actuallt reviewing!

Whoa! that was one long review! but it is appreciated. i try not to worry to much about spelling and such. but thanks for the pointers. this story is in ...

THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW. serous. i wasnt expecting any. i write on writers-network too, ts a good sight but no one reviews my stuff. eveyone elses. but not mine. ...