crewgurl93

Dang! That was really good. I love your writing. Consider me a fan! :) Anyway, I love this poem. Everything just... fits. I wish I could do that (cuz, try ...

Don't like the 'buts' but otherwise it's a good poem. I can sort of relate to it. That's why I decieded to read it. Oh, and your avatar is rockin'! ...

I agree with Cade... It is really rushed. Maybe a bit forced, also. Just take some time to add more to it. Show us what's going on instead of telling ...

I really like the concept of this poem. I do. The title 'Tomorrow' is what really caught me. The word represents a feeling of the forgetting of mistakes and leaving ...

Okay. I haven't done this in a while, so bear with me! "Pull over here, I'm hungry." "Joe's has good pasta" "Fine then, you know your way around here better ...

I like the idea of this, really good for a first story. It would appear as though everyone has already said what I was going to. No point in bombarding ...

It was okay... short for a chapter in a novel. A novel is usually is 40,000-70,000 pages. Maybe you should consider making it a shortstory... unless you do about ten ...

It was all right. A great idea atleast. You need to learn to cut out unneccesary words. Honestly, look at the first sentance and tell me that it makes sense. ...

I really liked it. As for punctuation, I think it's pretty good, but who am I to judge. Personally, I think poetry is about free expression. That includes how you ...