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Re: Vanessa-The misadventures of a man named Lucifer
Thanks for your advice! All of your questions will be answered after I post more origin stories.It%u2019s part of a series.
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Re: Conversions
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Feb 2, 2022
Very thoughtful and poetic! Yes,this is true.Change is inevitable,no one can avoid matter how hard we try,we cannot escape will follow us through the end of time,the ancient trees know ... -
Re: 'Writer' Limericks
You%u2019re welcome!
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Re: Katlin’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman
Okay,some answers: They live close (like right next to it) to the town and Katlin loves visiting %u201Cabandoned towns%u201D so her mother took her there. The boutique is still standing,it ...
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Re: 'Writer' Limericks
I thought it was nice,I liked it. But I also thought maybe it could say:%u201DHe%u2019d spilt his secrets.%u201D As a more %u201Cpoetical touch.%u201D I did like the poem,though.
Feb 1, 2022 -
Re: Wolfe’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman
You%u2019re welcome!
Jan 26, 2022 -
Re: Wolfe’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman
A little explanation:Eloise has decided to imprison Wolfe and turn him into a vampire,because she knows he will suffer more.She%u2019s targeting him because he saw her and she will not ...
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Re: Perfect is Imperfect
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Jan 26, 2022
Oh,cool poem! I actually watched Encanto and I loved it! This is nice and true.I feel like most people have felt like Mirabel,wondering if it were better to be someone ... -
Re: Perfect is Imperfect
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Jan 26, 2022
Oh,cool poem! I actually watched Encanto and I loved it! This is nice and true.I feel like most people have felt like Mirabel,wondering if it were better to be someone ... -
Re: Carmine’s story-Eloise:the demented doll woman
So..Carmine is mentioned in the main story,but isn%u2019t that important. However,Marcie is the main character and Wolfe comes with her on adventures. Carmine was just very weak and couldn%u2019t take
Jan 26, 2022 -
Re: Carmine’s story-Eloise:the demented doll woman
The family is the same family that had lost Crystal to Eloise.They will replace Crystal with Marcie.
Jan 25, 2022 -
Re: Crystal’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman
Thanks for reviewing. So this girl comes after she gets Lycidas.Crystal does escape her though,it%u2019s going to take years.She%u2019s an adult when she does.Lycidas also escapes,but that%u2019s in t
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Re: Tired
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Jan 12, 2022
This was very descriptive and detailed.How you talk about being afraid to fall asleep,because of these cascading thoughts.All I have to say for that is to breathe and relax when ... -
Re: Alessandra and Jayden-The car crash
You%u2019re welcome!
Jan 12, 2022 -
Re: Alessandra and Jayden-The car crash
Well%u2026You%u2019re right,it doesn%u2019t have a purpose.I just put it here.It%u2019s irrelevant. But Lycidas%u2019s story is important to the story.Also,Lycidas isn%u2019t dead,he%u2019s a vampire.
Jan 12, 2022
