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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Vanessa-The misadventures of a man named Lucifer

    Thanks for your advice! All of your questions will be answered after I post more origin stories.It%u2019s part of a series.

    Feb 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Conversions

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    Very thoughtful and poetic! Yes,this is true.Change is inevitable,no one can avoid matter how hard we try,we cannot escape will follow us through the end of time,the ancient trees know ...

    Feb 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: 'Writer' Limericks

    You%u2019re welcome!

    Feb 2, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Katlin’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman

    Okay,some answers: They live close (like right next to it) to the town and Katlin loves visiting %u201Cabandoned towns%u201D so her mother took her there. The boutique is still standing,it ...

    Feb 1, 2022
  • Poetry » Humor, Culture Re: 'Writer' Limericks

    I thought it was nice,I liked it. But I also thought maybe it could say:%u201DHe%u2019d spilt his secrets.%u201D As a more %u201Cpoetical touch.%u201D I did like the poem,though.

    Feb 1, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Wolfe’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman

    You%u2019re welcome!

    Jan 26, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Wolfe’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman

    A little explanation:Eloise has decided to imprison Wolfe and turn him into a vampire,because she knows he will suffer more.She%u2019s targeting him because he saw her and she will not ...

    Jan 26, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Perfect is Imperfect

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    Oh,cool poem! I actually watched Encanto and I loved it! This is nice and true.I feel like most people have felt like Mirabel,wondering if it were better to be someone ...

    Jan 26, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Perfect is Imperfect

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    Oh,cool poem! I actually watched Encanto and I loved it! This is nice and true.I feel like most people have felt like Mirabel,wondering if it were better to be someone ...

    Jan 26, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Carmine’s story-Eloise:the demented doll woman

    So..Carmine is mentioned in the main story,but isn%u2019t that important. However,Marcie is the main character and Wolfe comes with her on adventures. Carmine was just very weak and couldn%u2019t take

    Jan 26, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Carmine’s story-Eloise:the demented doll woman

    The family is the same family that had lost Crystal to Eloise.They will replace Crystal with Marcie.

    Jan 25, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Crystal’s story-Eloise the demented doll woman

    Thanks for reviewing. So this girl comes after she gets Lycidas.Crystal does escape her though,it%u2019s going to take years.She%u2019s an adult when she does.Lycidas also escapes,but that%u2019s in t

    Jan 19, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Tired

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    This was very descriptive and detailed.How you talk about being afraid to fall asleep,because of these cascading thoughts.All I have to say for that is to breathe and relax when ...

    Jan 12, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Alessandra and Jayden-The car crash

    You%u2019re welcome!

    Jan 12, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Alessandra and Jayden-The car crash

    Well%u2026You%u2019re right,it doesn%u2019t have a purpose.I just put it here.It%u2019s irrelevant. But Lycidas%u2019s story is important to the story.Also,Lycidas isn%u2019t dead,he%u2019s a vampire.

    Jan 12, 2022


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead