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Re: The moon witch- 1&2 + extra
I will guess the context.Selene lives in a magical kingdom where people have different colored skin and hair,Gods and talking animals exist, and men like Selene have feminine names.Selene and ...
Aug 9, 2022 -
Re: An Almost-Sonnet: Table for Two
I have a feeling that this other individual just wants to eat.They don’t want to take the time to actually savor it.I don’t feel like that agreement was genuine-I feel ...
Aug 8, 2022 -
Re: Writers block Piece?? I have no title :')
Wow! I didn’t expect that twist! What ever happened to Myria’s dear mother? I believe the title should be “Familiar Faces” because one would know who their mother is, but ...
Aug 7, 2022 -
Re: The Sky-Whale
The beach air welcomes us.The salty wind tosses our hair into funny curls.And the whale emerges, majestic and glorious.This was a lovely poem! I could smell the air of the ...
Aug 7, 2022 -
Re: I wish
We wish love were as easy and right as it is so often written and imagined.Some things are to be kept.Some are to be let go.We aren’t responsible for our ...
Aug 5, 2022 -
Re: The Blooming Blue Iris
I haven’t read the manga so I’m a little confused, but I enjoyed the poem nonetheless.I sense that this is a love poem.Not the kind that is ethereal and bright, ...
Aug 5, 2022 -
Re: Elias
To answer your question,I think this takes place in the 80s because you mention bright hoodies,streetlights,and for the type of person Elias is,I get the feeling that he is nihilistic ...
Aug 3, 2022 -
Re: Snake Poem
Nice rhythm poem! Like a snake.I don’t fear snakes lol.I have characters based on them.But thanks for the warning :D. I wonder what song it’s based on.When I first read ...
Aug 2, 2022 -
Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses
Wow! Those were some interesting facts about the Disney Princesses.I didn’t know Aurora was more forgotten.Growing up,Aurora was my favorite Disney Princess because she wore pink.I used to hate Tian
Aug 1, 2022 -
Re: My Lover Chapter One: The Encounter
This is an interesting love story! I can’t wait for more.What will Qiangwei do next? Guess I’ll have to find out.Just a few questions:Is his name Mingjun or Kaiwei? Does ...
Jul 31, 2022 -
Re: If the entire sun burned out of the sky (when) would you know?
Is there a way I’m supposed to read this or is it fine any way? I wonder if the end of the poem has different meanings if started differently.I like ...
Jul 30, 2022 -
Re: Snow In New East World
seems like pieces of the sun are falling off and turning into snowflakes.These snowflakes aren’t ordinary snowflakes.They evaporate straight through your tongue, leaving you to taste your own tissue
Jul 29, 2022 -
Re: Cross Your Heart, Hope We Don't Die - A Stranger Things AU Fanfiction
As soon as I saw that it was a Stranger Things fanfiction I knew what I had to do:Read it, of course! From what I read, it looks like Eddie ...
Jul 28, 2022 -
Re: Veni, Vidi, Vici
I knew Regulus Black was from Harry Potter,but I didn’t know much about him till I went on Google.I guess that says something about who he is,eh? The only people ...
Jul 27, 2022 -
Re: Abstract Love
Welcome to YWS! Can I just say that I like how you put them close together? I’m not sure if that was intentional,but it looks like someone’s cascading and complicated ...
Jul 26, 2022
