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The “Hellscape”, as described in the poem, is the industrialized world, the future. The “Garden of Eden”, is nature, coming down with its soft, gentle rain. This poem, I believe, ...

They’re calling Beatrice a witch? I thought that the whole lot of them were witches. I guess not. Goodness, it feels like everyone hates Kim and that’s not fair to ...

Whoa. I really liked this poem and the intentional errors. :0 It shows that the narrator isn’t thinking clearly. Their mind is in a haze of fear and desperation. And ...

This is so wholesome! Opening up takes trust and time. Your heart will figure out when it’s right. I absolutely adore the autumn scenery! I can smell the pumpkin spice ...

Very dark. :0 I like it. It’s final. This family is done. When the narrator of the poem dies, all traces of their family will be gone. Every. Single. One. ...

Cycling through life. Reaching to the top. Climbing through the mountain. Braving through the terror. When you reach the top, you find the cool wind and spectacular view. Yes, life ...

When all is left in the mind but nothingness, it is when the prettiest of ideas will come about. If one will allow them to come about, then all will ...

Such a pretty poem speaking the truth about growing up! It’s like you are expected to know everything and be ready for all that the real world will bring, yet ...

So the reanimated are never quite alive? They’re just monsters? How sad. Imagine all the people who were wonderful in life, but reduced to skeletal creatures in death. I have ...

The real world looms and taunts us once we are thrown into the open. Credit cards, like life, promises many things for us, but can we obtain those things? Are ...

I really enjoyed this poem! I like how you write that decomposition is the emotions that can kill. Like decomposition, overwhelming emotions can destroy someone from the inside-out, making them ...

Ooh. It’s very romantic. The poem speaks of someone who may have died, but they aren’t yet dead. They are merely waiting to be swept away by the autumn wind, ...

What I got from this poem:It’s about wanting to be free, like the rain. To glide freely in this place called life. To dance like the sparkled water that gives ...

It ends happily and justly, with you and your friend finding the stream of water. I liked reading this poem because it teaches that we can heal one another and ...

I really liked this short story that you made! This was very wholesome. :) My favorite part (Difficult to pick) was how you described yourself as a shadow, as I’m ...