crazysocklover117

Ha ha ha. nice going with the name. Johanna Banana Fo Fanna. Nice... Im geussing that this is suppose to be sort of a poem, type short story kinda thing? ...

That was really entertaining. I seriously though that was awesome. Your voice really comes out in your writing, and it's pretty descriptive! You gave enough description so that I could ...

This is a really awesome short story. There were only two things I didnt like about it, and they were pretty much really minor. The first thing was the 'pair ...

It seems like a bitter-sweet kind of peice. I really liked the begining in the courtroom. Mainly: The mallet against the wood was a familiar sound, almost like a farewell, ...

this is good. It gives sort of an understanding to the chachters, and the bond between them. It makes me feel kind of sad for henry. keep writing! I'd love ...