crazyhippo

Thanks for sharing another chapter of your novel. Your plot is very well told, the characters are again well expressed, and the story has a real flow to it. I ...

The y lived in a small, dingy room and most people would wrinkle their noses, but to the boys, this was home. Apart from on little spelling mistake, this was ...

Hi there, time for another review! Unlikely Visitors The sun gradually materialized behind the horizon. The last stars faded away, shunned by the powerful beams of summer. Darkness slowly receded, ...

Hey there, Time for a review for you! The pale goddess of the night cast her soft blue rays on the canopy of the woodland. A cool zephyr blew through ...

Hey There! Having read chapter 1 of this, I was eager to read on, already this has developed into a really interesting plot. So, to do a bit of nitpicking: ...

Not much I can say about this. A very well written piece, all gramatically correct and I can't see any mistakes in terms of spelling. The mood you've created is ...

Hi there! I hurried to pull on some black jeans and a dark sweater. Alan was waiting for me impatiently, and I had to move quickly. Adrenaline flowed through me ...

Hi there again. I'll review this chapter for you. Firstly, may I say that I love the image you've created for the title, it looks great. Anyway on to the ...

Hi there. majestic palaces built of leather and strung up by rope, now was slowly burning to the ground. Once beautiful gardens surrounded by thousands upon thousands of tents now ...

Hey! I'll do you a review... Now, that is when and how they got there main powers, well most of the children, all but one of them, Reana, Reana was ...

Hey there, I'll give you a review. It feels like hours that she’s been running from him full pelt through the forest and she still hasn’t caught a glimpse of ...