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Re: John the Cowboy Part 1 out of 4
Really great ideas. Ill hopefully get better at my descriptions in the 2nd part. Thanks for the feedback and please keep reading.
May 8, 2015 -
Re: John the Cowboy Part 1 out of 4
Thanks for the feedback. I've been busy lately but I plan on submiting the 2nd and 3rd part at the same time very soon though. Please keep reading and enjoy.
May 8, 2015 -
Re: Far From Death
Really nice story, just a few things though. One, try not to say your characters' names so much. Two, dialogue is what makes stories, but too much of any good ...
May 3, 2015