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Re: freedom in the darkness
This is a very good poem! Don't say it isn't! I didn't see any mistakes or Spelling mistakes except for a few. You will get the hang of poetry if ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Holiday Madness
Great job! Even though I never have travled out of my state, I know how hard travling is. My favorite part, ''The first day is the hardest, but it gets ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: tough guy
Hi! I think this was a great story! Some parts didn't really give much detail, for example: "Finally, Fred and rose got married and had 2 beautiful children and they ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Sadness And Sorrow
Hey dogsrule. Great poem! I feel that everybody has been bullied at a point in their lives. I had to change schools because of bullying. And to people who are ...
Aug 23, 2014
