constantia

First off, just to warn you, I don't really like to beat around the bush when reviewing/beta'ing a piece. That doesn't mean, however, that I am insensitive to the author's ...

I have come to fulfill your request!(: But... because this is such a long piece, I might need to split up this review into two or more posts. Well, unless ...

I liked it! Entertaining and cute(: But just a few things to address, if I may... I personally thing the first two paragraphs were a little choppy. It didn't flow ...

Because you haven't had a review for this chapter yet, and you had left a lovely one of support on mine... I thought maybe to return the gesture. I know ...

Haha, I liked it! Your narration gives the story its own kind of levity that's pretty refreshing. But I don't feel like the plot's entirely linear. If you had used ...

The usually merry breakfast table was still, the only sounds those of porridge being chewed and milk gulped down. I think you're missing a word or two here. I'm not ...

That was pretty amazing. A little confusing, but amazing nonetheless. Now, if I may address some of those confusing points...?(: “Now get out of here you worthless brat!” Millicent barked. ...

This gave me goosebumps. I'm honestly trying to push that "awe-moment" sensation aside, so that I can give you a proper review, but it's kind of difficult at the moment... ...

Oh crap. lol In all honesty. I went into this thinking it would have something to do with jealousy. And maybe it does, to some extent. But essentially, it's just ...

Omg. This has honestly left me a little breathless. It's a wounded girl, unknowingly stripped to her core by a stranger, but one who is willing to ease the wounds. ...

It's a nice dedication to the tragedy that is 9/11. I very much admire that you paid your respects through writing.(: Now, to go more in-depth... I don't necessarily agree ...

It's sweet. Reminds me of Elizabeth Barret Browning with some Shakespearean tones thrown in. lol Just be mindful of grammar and and punctuation. Though, considering this is poetry, you may ...

I cannot tell you how much I feel for this. I honestly relate to it, for reasons that I wish I didn't. Tell me if i'm wrong here, but this ...

This, was absolutely touching. I've been thinking a lot about 9/11 lately, for numerous reasons - not that I've lost anyone, but I think i'm just more aware. "Did you ...

Love it so far. Hope you continue with it. I'm interested to know how you've planned this out. I like some adventure and mystery hehe. Just a few things I ...