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I think I might take out the last line when I hand it in just because my teacher is SO anal about anything remotely cliche, but I'm going to keep ...

Thanks for the review! (:

Thanks for the review! It's nice knowing that people can relate to the things I write

Thanks for the review! :)

Awe thank you for the review. You flatter me too much! :)

Thanks for the review! Yeah the ending reaaaally needs to be fixed. Maybe I'll wait a couple months and come back to it with fresher eyes. Also, yeah, I can ...

This is lovely

I'm really sorry to hear! Had I known it was real life then I wouldn't have reviewed it in the way that I did.

I don't really have words, I just want you to know that this truly touched me

Thanks :)

I have nothing else to say except that I love this.

Thanks!! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Totally agree, that horror movie bit didn't fit well. I added it just to emphasize on the whole 'it's a bad thing' idea, but I should have given the reader ...

For sure! Just let me know when you're done with the reworked version and I'd be more than happy to give it a look :)

I can dig it