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No problem, and I think using organization would work, because, like you said, she does mention an organization!

Hi there! I'm starting to think I should have taken a step back and considered a few more things haha. This was a part of an attempted novel (9 chapters ...

Hey there! Does this really????? I don't see it, though I'm glad you do :) There are definitely missing elements. This was the beginning chapter to a story from long, ...

Hello! :) Yeah, this was actually the intro to a story I started a long while ago. I only made it 9 chapters and then took a (long) break. Found ...

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Hey there, comrie here to review! This was a very interesting story. I will sound off on the other reviewers' comments about providing more descriptions on just where the characters ...

Hey there! I was happy to do more than refer to the whole Nicholas Cloud thing here, and actually explain something. I honestly wasn't sure of the balloon's purpose (or ...

Hey! What no typos??!? I'm surprised. I was sure there was some somewhere... but that's good news, right? One less thing to worry about haha. Rereading that sentence now, I ...

Hey! Sorry I'm just replying now, but I'm back in action now! I never thought of it like that. In a way, the writing is contradicting itself. I also felt ...

Hey and it's been almost a month but we're just gonna ignore that, right? Haha The thing with the pace - I meanttbaf the story was going along a lot ...

No problem! I'm glad you think it's been helpful :)

Hey~ And yeah, I never had any intentions of developing Irma (just because I didn't realize how much I needed to), but I'm glad I did. I'm also glad you ...

It's funny you say that, I'm actually in the middle of getting it ready to post haha

Heya and that's okay! I didn't mind. And yeah I did take some off... but that's because I needed some time to think about where I'm going with this story. ...

No problem, and please do! I can't wait for the next one!