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Re: Thunder Storms
I have always liked rain!! Thunder and rain is a great metaphor to describe emotions. I like how you used it to establish the mood of the story. The first ...
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Re: Escape
This is very powerful! Poetry is a good way of expressing yourself. This poem expresses something that people go through a lot. Emotional pain and physical pain battle with each ...
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Re: The Undead Zone
HEY WHATS UP?? YAY FOR ZOMBIES! I loved this!! It really shows how humans react to survival situations! This could be a really good zombie novel! I tried writing one ...
Nov 4, 2013
