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Don't explain anything. It's perfect. Besideds the errors. But I think you did a wonderful job conveying your point. Awesomeness for your first try!!! Very well done.

That was EXTREEMLY confusing. Sorry. I'm lost. I'm sure if I could understand it I would totally love it.

This wasn't a very strong poem. it expresses feeling, but i think you could add a lot more. i would say really add a lot more emotion and this could ...

this is my favorite peice of mine. tied with a close second of lost in death. those are about the only two dark peices ive ever written. and i like ...

mm. i dont know. this was okay. =/ uhhhhm. yeah.

"Life’s too short, To fear and worry. Don’t take action, With unnecessary speed." no, this sounds to long and breaks it up too much. other wise bravo.

bravo. true story? that was very good. nice going. hm... there's not much to say. this would be a great oral orientation, better, i think, than a story. yep. =|

well guys, i tried in my new one, but i feel like the charectors still aren't known. how do i change this?

ehh what the heck. i'll do it now.

oh wow, do you know what? im really sorry. i didnt even know there was a post before this one. i feel really stupid. i thought this was all there ...

thanks everyone, after geting a couple more reveiws im going to redo it in a little bit of a longer version, trying to include all the suggestions. i think they ...

thanks you so much! that was really bugging me. =]

ok, i did this and edited it, but it still didn't change to how i wanted it. Dear Mr. Jeremy Brighton, This is a letter to inform you that Caitlyn ...

i love that song so much. death cab for cutie!!!! yay!!! anyways thanks for doing the song justice.

wow, i love it. i love action books, and i like romance. im excited. ill definately read the rest if you post it. =D