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Re: For Anna
I saw this before I got a notification for it What kind of dark magic is this
Sep 14, 2015 -
Re: For Anna
Hey, thanks for the review! Anna is the name of the person I wrote this poem for. I was very close with her and two other girls in middle school, ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: For Anna
Well, all of YWS is jealous of your mad rhyming skillz so um... The snort was because the poem is kind of bitter, and it makes it sound like I'm ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: For Anna
Hey, I just made some edits to the last stanza. I actually split it up a bit. Any thoughts?
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: For Anna
Thanks! Just a note: The word "depressed" can also mean a general state of unhappiness, although I see now that there are a lot of other words I could have ...
Sep 13, 2015 -
Re: For Anna
Not sure where the crapping was, Stranger. The comment about young writers was a bit of a generalization, but I wouldn't really call it crapping. Nessa, thanks for the advice! ...
Sep 12, 2015 -
Re: Representation
Thanks! *follows back*
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: Colors
I UNDERSTOOD THAT REFERENCE. Edit: I like how subtle this is. If you've read my one-and-a-half poems (one was a collab) on this subject, you will see why I can ...
Sep 1, 2015 -
Re: Roll the Credits
Yeah, that's the problem with posting lyrics. They're not really meant to be read. I'm sure I'll slap myself in the head and wonder how I ever felt like wasn't ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: Representation
Thanks for the review! "Squee" was intentional. Now you've made me question whether it's an actual word or if I just spend way too much time on TV Tropes. Thanks ...
Aug 26, 2015 -
Re: Representation
Hey, thanks for the review! The reason I asked people not to comment on the subject was to prevent people from writing a passionate comment opposing LGBT rights, and then ...
Aug 26, 2015 -
Re: Representation
Ah, this is the kind of review I live for. Thanks for the awesome feedback! :D
Aug 26, 2015 -
Re: Drizzle and Wings
Oh. I may have thought that the ending was referring to buffalo wings before I read this post
Aug 24, 2015 -
Re: A Repeating Repetitive Poem about Repeated Repetitiveness
I think we all know who wrote this... That's Lady Redundant Woman from WordGirl, if you didn't know. :P
Aug 10, 2015 -
Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night
I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D
Aug 6, 2015
