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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    I saw this before I got a notification for it What kind of dark magic is this

    Sep 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    Hey, thanks for the review! Anna is the name of the person I wrote this poem for. I was very close with her and two other girls in middle school, ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    Well, all of YWS is jealous of your mad rhyming skillz so um... The snort was because the poem is kind of bitter, and it makes it sound like I'm ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    Hey, I just made some edits to the last stanza. I actually split it up a bit. Any thoughts?

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    Thanks! Just a note: The word "depressed" can also mean a general state of unhappiness, although I see now that there are a lot of other words I could have ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: For Anna

    Not sure where the crapping was, Stranger. The comment about young writers was a bit of a generalization, but I wouldn't really call it crapping. Nessa, thanks for the advice! ...

    Sep 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Representation

    Thanks! *follows back*

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Colors

    I UNDERSTOOD THAT REFERENCE. Edit: I like how subtle this is. If you've read my one-and-a-half poems (one was a collab) on this subject, you will see why I can ...

    Sep 1, 2015
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Roll the Credits

    Yeah, that's the problem with posting lyrics. They're not really meant to be read. I'm sure I'll slap myself in the head and wonder how I ever felt like wasn't ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Representation

    Thanks for the review! "Squee" was intentional. Now you've made me question whether it's an actual word or if I just spend way too much time on TV Tropes. Thanks ...

    Aug 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Representation

    Hey, thanks for the review! The reason I asked people not to comment on the subject was to prevent people from writing a passionate comment opposing LGBT rights, and then ...

    Aug 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Representation

    Ah, this is the kind of review I live for. Thanks for the awesome feedback! :D

    Aug 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Drizzle and Wings

    Oh. I may have thought that the ending was referring to buffalo wings before I read this post

    Aug 24, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: A Repeating Repetitive Poem about Repeated Repetitiveness

    I think we all know who wrote this... That's Lady Redundant Woman from WordGirl, if you didn't know. :P

    Aug 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: i wrote this in the middle of the night

    I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

    Aug 6, 2015


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