cleverclogs

just trying to help.

Hey, thanks for the review! The title is the same because the author of the other poem wanted me to write this. About the line you pointed out, the "rare" ...

Yeah, I was kinda grasping at straws there. I mean, they both begin in a short "e" sound and have the "ect" so I was like "whatever, close enough" XD

Yeah, basically. It might not seem like a big problem to you, but it is because of the way YWS works. I'll try to explain: When a work is first ...

Um, no ones beating you up. I was just pointing out that you didn't really leave a review. There's an option to just post it as a comment if you ...

I thought "majesty" and "seed" were close enough, since they both had the "ee" sound. Okay, so I would normally post this on your wall or pm you about it, ...

You literally just said that the review is "nothing", so why did you mark this as a review? It cheats the writer out of good feedback, because once the work ...

Um, can you be more specific? Which stanza doesn't rhyme?

Yeah, the barking is more of a family joke, because that's more of the sound he made. It's hard to describe it as a "meow" XD

Thanks for the awesome review! Both Pepe and the one who died (Big Guy) are cats. I was trying to use cat-specific body language to get that across, but i ...

Ahhh my attempts were futile!!

Woo! :P

Haha, sure :D

ooh, this actually just occurred to me, but you could try listening to slam poems. They are different from written free verse, but listening to it might help you understand ...

Thanks for the suggestions! I definitely agree that "shine" was overused; I'll be sure to hit the thesaurus. And the last suggestion is definitely a better way to word that ...