cleverclogs

Your premise sounds interesting, but your writing could use some revision. Unfortunately our seclusion is short lived, and this is what happens when they mix. This sentence, for example, could ...

Ooh, this made my heart hurt. It's not at all a sappy romance, it's very real and understandable. Your writing is lyrical, and perfectly describes Eric's crush. I'm sitting here ...

As the previous reviewer said, very chilling and intense. That was quite a plot twist. It would be nice to learn some context, though. What happened to the buildings? Who ...

This is a lovely piece of work. As Milanimo said, it can be interpreted many different ways. I thought of the movie theme as sort of a metaphor, and the ...