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There's nothing deeper than the superficial outside of this poem. Where's the deeper meaning?

Hey BadlyDrawnLightning, thanks for the review. "Sow" should not be "snow" as it is referring to the female form of a pig. There is a fun comparison to young, fresh, ...

Thanks so much for reviewing, every one :) the ideas of improvement from everyone are quite helpful and perhaps at a later date I will implement them. As much as ...

Thanks so much for reviewing, every one :) the ideas of improvement from everyone are quite helpful and perhaps at a later date I will implement them. As much as ...