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wow! Thank you so much for the elaborate comment/ feedback. I would definitely be more careful next time.hehehe. While reading your comment, I can't help myself but grin since grammar ...

Can i also give your rating/feedback a "wow?" hehehe. I am hoping to become a writer someday, erotic-romance writer more especifically. Thank you for appreciating my work.

Its a nice and cute poem. If you don't mind me saying, I just want to suggest using some metaphor to make it more beautiful. :) Thumbs up still!