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Re: My Ghost
This is very short. Maybe tooo short. I dont think you expressed yourself as much as you couldve. Its good, but you should expand it, make it longer so you ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: ...breaking down
I like this alot. It expresses the problems of life in a simple but meaningful way. It is a very open and explicit sort of poem because you let your ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Ashes and Shards
This is really beautiful. I absolutely love it. It gives me a feeling of sadness mixed with reminiscence. This is perfectly written and i think you should have more confidence ...
Apr 30, 2013
