christian

this an awesome poem it reminded me of myself hope you know you aren't the only one like you i'm exactly the same i think it could have rythmed a ...

thanks

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sorry i didn't no how to post so it was a fluke i will repost it when i get enough points and its demo of the book i'm writing

sorry i didn't no how to post so it was a fluke i will repost it when i get enough points

you did great with the characters and how determined they were i think it was great really,but i don't like how Tim swears and whatnot i also think he was ...

great short i wonder where you got the idea to write about what you did? i hope you make a second part!your a great writer i mean it!keep writing i ...

great short.i didn't finish it but i don't have to it's good.