chloe13

I really like this story :) Your writing style is good, just it seems your sentences are really repetitive in the struture you use like; "I couldn’t shake the image ...

. . .I wonder how many points livurdestiny got for that review . . . Anyway, I really like this story,and since you wrote this a year ago I'm sure ...

Wow, I don't really write that much poetry (not really my thing) but that was absolutely spectacular! This bit really hit home for me . . . Love is so ...

Excellant! Loved the rhytmic flow of everything, it made the story really enjoyable and easy to read. This really evoked emotion from me, not really sure why, I think it ...

I actually really like your writing style. It's cool and descriptive when it needs to be (I love the way you describe) but at times it kind of feels like ...

Great descriptive writing. I have a really clear image of what sophia looks like as a result! *sigh* typical teen flipping off his father (aren't we all guilty of similar ...

I love the idea behind this, really imaginative. You've started to define the roles and relationships between the characters really effectively. I'm hoping this'll be a bit like future gladiators ...

Aaah, such beautiful and powerful imagery. You have a really lovely writing style, really discriptive, whilst readings this at times I found I could almost taste or smell what you ...

I've always really liked werewolf novels so of course I'm naturally attracted to this one. Just a couple things though,all numbers below 100 have to written in word form. so ...

I like where you've gone with this. I pretty much agree what everyone else has said, the start didn't really have me, but then towards the end I was really ...

I really liked this! I've always found a tragic ending more emotionally powerful than a happy one! The fluid way you've written this takes the readers hand and drags them ...

All I can say is exellent!! I find myself envious of your writing style and how fluidly your dialogue flows! You definitely have a great idea here and I'll be ...

The way you've started your story with a bit of action really gets a reader in. The first impression I have of Donny is that he's going to be a ...

I like where you've gone with this.I like the way you've matched the elements with their characteristic emotions, perhaps (and you don't have to listen to me) the use of ...