chloe13

I found this mesmerizing, something that most other stories on this site fail to achieve. It's hard to explain, but the way this story was told, it creates a soothing ...

I really liked this! I could see the scenario really clearly in my head and hear the characters voices! The way you made Del sound made me picture this innocently ...

Can't really find much to critique about this, so I'll just tell you that I thought this was really good! I thought the tense you used was the best part, ...

Wow, I really like your characters so far, and as stated, the death of a character leaves room for a lot of future developement, which makes me interested in future ...

Very dark and compelling. The concept of the clock is what kept me interested in the first place, but then your style of writing really drew me in (It is ...

Good job! I could hear the alien's voice really clearly in my head and see everything you were describing. But I can't help but say that there are so many ...

Haha love it :) I found it funny how dramatic this was considering the topic was ice-cream =D I actually started to salvate when you were discribing the flavours teehee ...

Overall, I thought this was really clever and interesting to read. I liked the points you made, and the way this was written; it was like I was really inside ...

Loved it! I whole-heartedly agree that Harry shall always have a special place in my heart :( Plus, I heard Rowling was maybe going to write more, I don't know ...

I don't really know alot about poetry, but the imagery was really vivid in this and the rhymth make sit really easy and enjoyable to read . . . made ...

Loved it! The start reminds of something that happened to my friend, reminds me of how we both felt . Just one thing, how she clenches her fists until she ...

I'm intrigued! It almost seems believable that that is what could happen to the world, (since religion is so . . .how should I say . . .Highly regarded.) You ...

I liked it! The way the kids react to eachother is really natural and believable. And I agree, it's like in books people just assume everyone is white until the ...

Wow, this evokes such strong emotion . . sad, I nearly started to cry! The bit at the end was really beautiful, you're a really talented writing and I hope ...

This was really touching, I think I'm gonna go hug my Dad now haha :) It's brilliant in its simplicity really. Do you do any other kinds of writing? Like ...