chlerity

Yes, I have a bad habit of typos. I get lazy with grammar a lot of the time just because I have no patience for it if I'm on a ...

Thank you for the grammatical critiques. I get ahead of myself sometimes and forget to check over that. But in regards to your questions about the story, I have just ...

Yes, thank you, I'm so glad that this was relatable! Part of this actually started out as a journal entry, so I'm pleased that you picked up on the reflectiveness ...

Thank you for your input! I agree that my paragraphs are fairly long, which is something that I struggle a lot with when writing, so I could definitely re-work that. ...

Yes! The stuttering at the end was a nice addition. I think it aids in signifying the transition from his previous stream of thought to his new beginning stream of ...