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Alright, well here we go. ^^ "Damn it Tom will you turn that crap down? I believe you want to put a coma after Tom. =3 She took kids without ...

Hello, my name is Katie. As June told you above, there is a 2:1 ratio. =3 Anyways, time for the review. We were all there- My father, Helena, even my ...

I agree with everyone here. I found little mistakes, but those I did find everyone else found as well. A few of the lines were corny, like others said, but ...

Maybe it's my lack of experience in reviewing other pieces, but I don't think I found any other mistakes that EmmaJane hadn't covered. Well done over all, the descriptions definitely ...

Here I am. =] Note: Most my comments are on the fact that you have present tense, not past. So technically they are suggestions. A glob of strawberry jam slips ...

Negative: I'm not really sure on how to comment on this. Most of it is just kind of confusing and I wouldn't know where to start. Maybe you should read ...

Very nice overall. I only found one thing, I believe. Choosing not to reply, I laid back beside him and closed my eyes, imaging Bryce twenty years from now, I ...

Oh my. I absolutely adored this poem. It was 100% right with how Google is used and looked upon. Very nice style and use of words. I do agree with ...

I thought it was very good, from the beginning to the end. It was very easy to picture, very well described. They were all solid characters and you had me ...

I thought this was a very good poem. It had depth and meaning among the words. I'm not sure if I can find anything wrong with it, though I'm probably ...