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This made my day. I love, "Just keep walking." So good. This had me cracking up. Well done, my friend!

I like this work. It is thought-provoking. The world My world Is rocked back and forth. (I like this line. It works well with the rest of the poem, suggesting ...

In a year. The world My world If you say "the" world you can't say that this is your world... Or put a comma.. Is rocked back and forth. World---forth--->not ...

Thank you all for your reviews! I've edited it a little bit, but I think I've got to really do some work to add in more sensory details. Thanks again ...

Loved it. This is EXACTLY my kind of thing, so you've got me hooked. The story is so different and fresh, I can't wait to see what happens. PLEASE let ...

Wow! This whole thing is soo captivating! Once again, I didn't really spot any mistakes, usually I'm too busy focusing on the meat of the story. But, anyway, it's really ...

"Who are you?" ^oohhh... intrigue! I loved this, it was suspenseful, and I really want to know what happened to her parents and what the deal with Mrs. Brown is! ...

Yeah, I couldn't find anything wrong here! It's really great, I'm eager for more! Let me know when the next chapter is up? Adios! Shannon

Reallly liked it. It was different and quirky. Like, you can tell these two people are totally drawn together, but it never lasts. Sad. But fascinating. And different. Two thumbs ...

Edward? What happened? He just didn't even seem like Edward to me anymore, most of the time. Exactly! I felt like his character changed completely, and the chemistry wasn't the ...

Hahaha, yes, I definitely did! Jacob and Rosalie fighting was one of the best parts.

wow, wow, wow. this was fantastic. im totally going onto read part two, it was phenomenal.

I literally just threw this together in an hour, so reviews, pretty please? I know that it's probably not the greatest, but my editing skills are horrendous. Also, this (or ...

this was beautiful, i truly enjoyed it. im awful at reviewing poetry, so thats all i have to say!

my gooodness!!! that was fantastic. it was compelling, you wanted to see what was going to happen, i was afraid he was going to rape her! haha, but it was ...