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  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: with reason

    it doesn't even rhyme what the heck

    Jan 16, 2013
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    *drumroll* ===================================================== We return to INFRA, ULTRA, LUCIFER and ABHOR. ABHOR is a safe distance away as the others duke it out. INFRA and ULTRA, with orb-enhanc

    Aug 30, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    We apologise to our viewers. The fight of the century will be delayed. ===================================================== From a bird's-eye view, we see New Sydney being ransacked by demonic figure

    Aug 28, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    So... do I feel like killing off Gladman? ===================================================== As LUCIFER pulls GLADMAN towards his mouth, TEMPO and ULTRA both rush towards LUCIFER. INFRA hesitates a

    Aug 21, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    What happens next? This: ===================================================== INFRA and ULTRA continue running. ULTRA: ... No... That light - They've already done it! INFRA remains silent. As they re

    Aug 20, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    That might be true about the fighting, but remember that Tempo was ambushed whereas Infra and Ultra willingly stepped up to fight. Probably in the final product, the fight will ...

    Aug 16, 2007
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The Fire Within

    Heh, thanks guys for your compliments. Unfortunately I'm not in a band and don't play instruments or anything, and so as of yet this song has never been performed, so ...

    Aug 10, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    Mmm, that's true. Well, I'll stick with Paint the Town Red for now. ===================================================== TEMPO, arm-cannon raised, begins firing at INFRA, who leaps over the barrage t

    Aug 8, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    =D Thanks Kitty for your consistent advice and comments, and Adam and Isdada for your help too. On to the subject of titles. "Underworld Breakout"... bit stupid. What do you ...

    Aug 3, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    Well, first things first, I made some minor edits to the previous instalment. Second things second, Mattisdada, you stud! Welcome to our humble YWS! We go way back. And yes, ...

    Aug 2, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    And we're back from the commercial break. Get time to stretch your legs? Lovely. ===================================================== As PONCHO closes the door on his way out of the lab, we see ULTRA

    Aug 1, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    Heh, that's true. Gladman and Poncho are just recurring minor characters though, and I don't even know if Gene and Wilde will return after Underworld Breakout. Anyway, under the advice ...

    Jul 31, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    Hmm... I've certainly bollocksed this up. See, I edited the previous post whenever I had new script to add, so as not to double-post. However, this meant that there was ...

    Jul 30, 2007
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Whore of the Wind, Girl of the Tide

    Wow. I was impressed by that, and I'm not easily impressed... Look! A blue car! Seriously though, I really can't see anything that needs to be improved. So all I ...

    Jul 29, 2007
  • Script » General, General Re: InfraRed 01 - Lord of the Underworld

    Mmm indeed. I think an abridged version will be in a later story arc. XD EDIT: Moar! (I edited the last bit slightly, as I remembered Infra needs to hold ...

    Jul 26, 2007


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