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Whoa. This is really vivd. I could imagine that! Well done. lol. I know this was written like 4 months ago but i really had to say something. :D I ...

Hey Rory Lewis. Nice to meet you and welcome to YWS. Ok well i started reading this, i dont mean to be such a put down, but i have to ...

Hey. Personally i thought that the beginning was quite funny. I, don't know bout the rest of you guys, wanted to keep reading. I want to know what this strange ...

Hey! I love this piece! It seems so fresh and orignial. It seems realistic and i love it. I mean, that's like something we all say, and i can even ...

omg. This just keeps getting better and better. I'm hooked. And im also goin to rite now to read the rest. byee!! p.s. I found no mistakes (probably because i ...

Wow. I felt like i was just riding a really fast train. I love the pace of this story. It seems perfect; like the intensity of the girls beating heart. ...

Ok here i noticed more grammatical mistakes than last time. Here. "I lifted cupped my hand around one and blew lightly against it. A hiss of pain passed my lips ...

Wow this is even better than the others. And way funnier. She reminds me of Anne of green gables...but thats just my opinion. You may not have read it tho. ...

Hey this is really good. its simply, no info dumps, and clear and straight to the point. I love the angel devil voices n her head. Hilarious. I'm still not ...

omg!! hahahah this is sooo retarded. i dont even get it!! lol. *wipes tear* haha. whooo. and i dont really get what he was saying bout that whole "It is ...

Hey. this is the first time i've ever read anything of yours. This story is really good. there are just a few things that bothered me. He was quite muscular, ...

This is literally a piece of magical art. Im serious! The whole feel of the story is so mistifying. No kidding. Its really amazing. As soon as i read it ...

its very intriguing i must say. I like how you let us into her head and imagination. I've never read a story before when the character daydreams in such a ...

omg!! yay!! Im soo glad you finally wrote this! I was waiting forever!! I don't really see any corrections that need to be made. I'm not the type of person ...

Um sorry but the whole love thing is pretty fast! Its unreal. I mean, how can she just fall in love with someone and let someone do that to her ...