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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not My Turn

    oh, this is good! I can feel the anger bubbling just beneath the surface!This poem really portrays the story of the complications of friendship when one friend doesn't know the ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Crimson Tears

    I feel....sorrow. I love the metaphor you use with the flower and crimson tears, and the word wither just really makes the piece so much more.....I don't know, but it ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Memories up in the Attic

    I really like this poem! It has a flow to it that's.......different. I love the part describing the contents of the box! It very vivid, maybe even more so because ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Rain Drops

    whoa, this is, whoa. I've never thought about like that before. You were able to be extremely thought provoking and still rhyme! This is my favorite part: So the tears ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Truth About My Reality

    I like this poem. This poem is like gravel in my mind, it's choppy, it's abrasive, it's got a point to prove. What I really like how this poem takes ...

    Dec 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Unwritten

    I like that song and I like this poem! It flows rather well for someone rusty! There's only one line I feel doesn't fit my life is un-defined. it just ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To the Deaf Firmament

    This poem makes me immensely sad. It twist my gut in such a way tears well up. whether language works or not, this poem does illustrate the deep emotion of ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re:

    Sweet as sugar, this piece is, it makes my eyes light up! It sounded a little shaky in the beginning, but now I see it's suppose to sound like that ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Writing

    THIS POEM IS FANTASTIC!!! I like the kind of uplifting, slightly comical, rhyme scheme and tone this poem has! I also like the message it has. I couldn't have put ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Letter To Johanna

    Wow, very disturbing, I'm impressed. It wasn't clear what happened to Johanna in the beginning, but then again, it probably wasn't suppose to be. After the beginning it was clear ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Snow Day

    To me this poem is like hot chocolate, it warms you right up!I love the imagery, and the holiday feeling it brings! I like how the poem progresses from the ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Charms

    Hi, I normally don't review short stories, but I'll give it a try. First, there are spelling errors, I'm not going to quote them because I'm lazy so just copy ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Words

    Short and sweet! I like it! I especially like the first four lines! Words, words, words carefully crafted somewhere between my soul and fingertips I like the repetition at the ...

    Dec 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Under My Skin

    I like this poem. I like how it transitions to different parts, what you see, what's just under the surface, and what's deep inside. I can relate to this poem, ...

    Dec 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: New World

    This poem sounds melancholy. Well written a very nice, but melancholy. It makes me feel melancholy too, and I can relate to it, which makes it a phenomenal poem, being ...

    Dec 12, 2011


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