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It's strange to see so many people feel the same. When you're going through what your feeling, it really doesn't feel like it. I like this poem, although I feel ...

I'm really liking this. I've found what I think is a mistake in the second chapter. Although I was due to return in a few days, I’d missed her best ...

Wow! I love this! I just can't wait to read more. I thinks its a really sensitive subject that you have written about, something that i think most people come ...

OK. I like this poem. There are a few things I would change. curly and fuzzy and wrinkled and small, oh so small. I would take out the oh so ...

I like this poem...you just need to develop it. Maybe make the lines longer to add some rhythm to it. By the way, this poem does have something that attacks ...

I like this. I write this sort of thing sometimes and it really helps me just to let my thoughts out, even if they don't make sense to anyone else ...

I really like it. the only thing i would change is each taking a turn to each take a turn but that's only in my eyes! also, Staring into each ...

I think it is a really good poem, but if you put capital letters at the beginning of each line and capital letters for "I". Also I don't think you ...

I like it, but i don't really understand the last verse. [/quote]But these nights I lock my doors for now I know you're kind all to well. Before you my ...